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We sit in our blocks of flats
making drama in our heads

searching for things to complain about
watching the time run out

while nature fights for its existence
cruel evidence of this breed

man thinks he can rule everything
but without trees he couldn't breathe

we should learn to respect the nature
and stop digging our own grave

man should learn respect from animals
no other breed destroys this planet like us

we only care for the moment
but our children, will they have their moment?
©2008-2009 *vonderwall
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Author's Comments

Poem #4 based on my poll
"What would you like me to write a poem about?"
- it's still in my journal, you can still make suggestions if you want me to write about something. I can always try...

This poem is for :iconthedauphine:
- her suggestion was "nature and animals".

I'm sorry this poem turned out more like worrying about our planet. But it's still about nature and animals.
And important issues.
I hope this poem doesn't suck badly. O.o

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:iconthedauphine:
Wonderful! :love: I love it, thank you! :D

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I'm glad you like it! :iconspinplz:

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:iconthedauphine:
I sure do! :iconspinplz:

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:aww:

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:iconconrisade:
I espeacially like this beginning, where there is a rhyme, I have got a weak for rhyming poems...
I like the story^^
could it really be reality?

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Reasonless Happyness!! =D
:iconcharon1:
I could not agree more!
Well done :)

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This is wonderful dear,and so very sad but true!!

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:iconvonderwall:
Thank you dear. :aww: Yes, it's sad. :( But glad if u like the poem. :hug:

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Thank you my friend. :hug:

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