Standing on the edge
not able to move
just waiting
for the final push
or pull back
I don't care anymore
for a moment I thought
someone was here
standing by my side
holding my hand
with a delicate touch
wasn't real
tried to reach out
no one there
just cold air
how I wished
you were real
wanted to give you
my hand
pull you away
from the edge
tell you
it's gonna be okay
show you
the distant shimmer
of a lighthouse
now I'm not sure
if I see it anymore
it's so cold...














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"wanted to give you
my hand
pull you away
from the edge
tell you
it's gonna be okay"
because everyone has a moment where they are ready to jump and just need someone to tell them that things will get better!
I really appreciate your words.
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The way you show the outer you and the inner you both at the same time is really incredible!
Remember... just because you can't see the lighthouse anymore doesn't mean it isn't there.
It's so amazing the way you are able to put so much emotion into your poems.
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Maybe I just have so strong emotions... dunno...
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All of us have felt this way.
Though, I wish this wasn't true.
The ending is perfect, because it's like a cliffhanger (Ironic, huh?) and it's also very emotional, like all of your poems. I think you're one of my favorite poets because of the stunning emotion you're able to put into words, and into poems. You're amazing. ^_^
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I know.
It's there.
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