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:iconvonderwall:
Full view, please...
Poem and pic by me.

:blushes:
Just something...



Sorry if the text is too small...
Here's the poem once again...




I wish I could
give you the moon

the most beautiful tune

the whole starry sky
and wings to fly

sweetest tone of blue
green and red and yellow too

and snow white
light so bright

heart of a candle
and love you can handle

my purple little heart
torn apart

by this crazy world

still singing
like a bird

you know I'd never hurt

I wish I could
find the words

beautiful enough

but if my words are real
maybe it is enough
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:iconteaphotography:
Mood: Love `TeaPhotography Jul 23, 2009  Professional General Artist
:omg: It's so beautifully written. You did wonderfully! :heart:
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:iconvonderwall:
Thank you dear. :iconfurryglompplz: I'm glad you like it. :aww:
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:iconteaphotography:
`TeaPhotography Jul 26, 2009  Professional General Artist
Most certainly, :aww: My pleasure! :hug:'s
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:iconnejja:
Beautiful, really... You should write a novel. I think that you are a good writer and you have a lot to say... :aww:
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:iconvonderwall:
Thank you dear, I'm so glad you like my humble poems. :hug: :aww:
Maybe some day I'll write. :nod: :writersblock: :typerhappy:
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:iconnejja:
You are welcome. I truly believe that it would be a good idea. I wrote a novel and it was one of the best periods of my life: I was full of passion for writing that story and I loved my characters so much! I used to listen to my favourite music and write for hours... It was a good experience, I was surprised by the things that I wrote sometimes, I took feelings from deep inside and I put them on white papers and it helped me to realize many things that I didn't before. I used to cry and smile at the same time while reading again that lines at the end of the day. I spent that time of my life in a very positive way and sometimes I miss it... :aww:
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:iconvonderwall:
Aww, that's cool! What is your novel about? :reading:
Was it published? :wow:
I know, writing is very good therapy... I've always written a lot... :writersblock:
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:iconnejja:
The story takes place in the future 'cause I like science fictions :aww:
I tried to publish it but it's pretty hard unfortunately :)
I will try again one of these days: you have to work much and to be constant to do it and I wasn't able to dedicate so much time to it the last years... I will see :aww:
It's true: to write is a good therapy :hug:
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:iconvonderwall:
I really hope you'll get your story published. :nod: :hug: :reading: :library:
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