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Would you skate with me
on thin ice of life
would you dance for life?

No time to rehearse
straight on to the show
just raise your head and go

We'll be just fine
because you're mine
and I'll never let you go

Would you dance with me
even if the ice breaks
under our feet?
:iconvonderwall:
inspiration: a dream I had...
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:icontanafeyroyale:
*tanafeyroyale Aug 6, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery is beautiful!
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:iconvonderwall:
Oh thank you, glad if you think so. :aww:
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:iconmirator:
It is wonderful poem dear! :hug:
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:iconvonderwall:
Thanks hun. :hug: Glad you think so :aww:
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~leahwest4 Jul 29, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Must have been quite a dream dear! :love:
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~leahwest4 Jul 30, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
:w00t:
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:iconvonderwall:
You know, sometimes you have a dream and you are so in it... and just before something great is about to happen you wake up. O.o
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~leahwest4 Jul 30, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Ugh...sooo frustrating...*sighs*
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:iconvonderwall:
Oh yeah... O.o
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