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Light wind
lifted me
surprisingly

beam touched
gently, smiling

my face
frozen by pain

from the ground
joy rose, bubbling
I recognized
my old friend

oh what did
black shadow do to you
locked into basement
out of my reach

how did you get out
did you break the bars

if you only live
for one day
like butterfly

this moment
is a miracle

can't see the shadow
can't feel it
strangling me

look at me
I'm a flower
©2008-2009 *vonderwall
:iconvonderwall:

Author's Comments

This is a poem I wrote in Finnish and in English at the same time! It's funny. Usually I write in either Finnish or English.

Well, here's the Finnish version
eli tässä on suomenkielinen versio vielä ---


"Siunattu, elossa"


Kevyt tuuli
nosti ilmaan
yllättäen

säde kosketti
varoen, hymyillen

kasvojani
kipuun jäätyneitä

maasta nousi ilo
kuplien
tunsin sen vielä
vanhan ystävän

mitä tekikään
sinulle musta varjo
sulki kellariin
saavuttamattomiin

miten pääsit vapaaksi
rikoitko kalterit

vaikka eläisit
vain päivän
kuin perhonen

tämä hetki
on ihme

en näe varjoa
en tunne
sen kuristusotetta

katso
olen kukka

:rose:

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:iconlyriclover627:
Wow, this is amazing. It's simply beautiful. The last line is perfecto! Great work, as always xD
:hug:

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“Damaged people are dangerous because they know they can survive.”
:iconpridescrossing:
Beautiful!!!Love the lines "If you only live for one day like butterfly...this moment is a miracle":clap::love:

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"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)."
-e.e. cummings :heart: :) :peace: :butterflytwo:

I now have a few photos for stock use located at *gild-a-stock please check out her stock!!!:)
I also put images in my scraps that can be used
:iconvonderwall:
Thank you dear, I'm so glad you like it! :hug:

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All in all it´s all just bricks in the wall.

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Thank you so much, Sandy! :glomp: :love:

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All in all it´s all just bricks in the wall.

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:)You're so very welcome!!:hug:

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"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)."
-e.e. cummings :heart: :) :peace: :butterflytwo:

I now have a few photos for stock use located at *gild-a-stock please check out her stock!!!:)
I also put images in my scraps that can be used
:iconlyriclover627:
You're welcome. :]

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“Damaged people are dangerous because they know they can survive.”
:iconvonderwall:
:aww: :sun:

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All in all it´s all just bricks in the wall.

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:aww: :cuddle:

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All in all it´s all just bricks in the wall.

Facebook: [link]=profile

Twitter: [link]
:iconpridescrossing:
:heart: :cuddle:

--
"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart)."
-e.e. cummings :heart: :) :peace: :butterflytwo:

I now have a few photos for stock use located at *gild-a-stock please check out her stock!!!:)
I also put images in my scraps that can be used

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